Review Detail of ZephyrZero in Marvel X DC: The Vongola Family

The pacing is good but the translation of the Reborn items are a bit off. It destroys the immersion because you'll be thinking what the is the mc talking about but, There's few Reborn fanfic so that's something to look forward to. Can't really give a high valuation of the character design and world as this is a fanfic.