Review Detail of Angel420u in The villainess shall be mine
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Very good story but I can tell that the story doesn't click with me. Might try to read more later but will probably not. Hopefully this gets finished and not dropped.
The villainess shall be mine
Kepalozoid
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When the Judgement came out the plot hit me like a bus. I felt like so many important things were happening in the same scene so it overwhelmed me and it didn't help how slow paced it became for the next 10 chapters. Overall the first arcs curveball as well as the important things said by Price had me realize this story isn't really my type. Also my bad if the names are wrong.
Kepalozoid:Thanks for reading ^^ Can you be more specific on what didn't click with you? Your feedback will certainly helps me improve.
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