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Kepalozoid
KepalozoidAuthor1yrKepalozoid

100 chaps review 🐧 First of all, thank you, my beloved readers, for your support. Thanks for the Golden tickets and the power stones, and sorry for the shortcomings! I know you all, you who were there since the beginning, and I will give you exclusive character arts in the future. Also, this is my first novel, and I am clearly an amateur in many areas, so thanks for the feedback, suggestions, and criticisms, for those who posted them with the intention to see me improve, and if some of you read this, I want you to know that I improved the MC's character in the early chapters, and he is now a hundred times better. In addition to that, I learned how to use commas and improved the dialogues. I am still practicing but I can feel the improvements that I made when I edited the early chapters. ***** As for those who want to read my book, don't hesitate and please give it a go!!! At first, you will think that it's a bit cliched but as you continue, you will understand that the plot is actually quite complicated. (Please read the reviews below if you want to know more about the setting. He already said it all) And... There will be no harem even if there are a few female characters. This is related to the MC's character. I always appreciate your feedback, and sometimes, I discuss with the readers in the comment section and get a little bit heated by the critics, but I want to improve so don't hesitate. I learned to accept critics and use them to correct and refine my writing ability. Well, I still need an editor though to polish it further. 🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧 Thank you for reading!!

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The villainess shall be mine

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Black_Flame777
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thank you for the novel I have read a same type-genre of webnovel (won't say the name), but the mc in that was soo childish and he acts so immature after being Reborn and ffs he was the biggest simp I have ever read. thank you for the NO-harem, no offense but I never liked harem (maybe max 3 wives are enough, nah 2 is enough) the story was too serious in beginning now its better....

bop_2803
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Author please make him fall in love with a real villainess. Not some princes or some girl that plays pranks on her planet. A villainess that's actually evil.

bop_2803
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princess*

bop_2803:Author please make him fall in love with a real villainess. Not some princes or some girl that plays pranks on her planet. A villainess that's actually evil.
Arisht
ArishtLv1Arisht

Thanks for the chapters, dear author. I appreciate the time and effort you put making every chapter. ^^

Kepalozoid
KepalozoidAuthorKepalozoid

^^ It may be even more complicated than that... Continue reading

bop_2803:Author please make him fall in love with a real villainess. Not some princes or some girl that plays pranks on her planet. A villainess that's actually evil.
Kepalozoid
KepalozoidAuthorKepalozoid

Let me know if you need more explanation about certain chapters ^^ I put a lot of easter eggs and reference there... Also, details that seem unimportant at first, but in the long run, they are all important x)

Arisht:Thanks for the chapters, dear author. I appreciate the time and effort you put making every chapter. ^^
Kepalozoid
KepalozoidAuthorKepalozoid

You can join the official Discord server now. The link is on my profil ^^

Black_Flame777:thank you for the novel I have read a same type-genre of webnovel (won't say the name), but the mc in that was soo childish and he acts so immature after being Reborn and ffs he was the biggest simp I have ever read. thank you for the NO-harem, no offense but I never liked harem (maybe max 3 wives are enough, nah 2 is enough) the story was too serious in beginning now its better....