To author your story line is great but please don't repeat same scenes (he know about hidden quest then he went there and kill all enemy and got experience) This is all in this novel until now, Plz add some scenes of protagonist personal life his history and situations in real life he always play games 24 hrs with same plot repeatedly didn't do anything else And that girl flowing him blindly without asking anything, come on it is believable at some point but, she is following this long
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