Review Detail of Davis111 in Net Game: All My Pet Beasts Are Goddesses

Average to decent. A good time waster. The overall plot is good, the story is good, the world background is good. There is not a lot of info dumps, but when they occur it is short. This novel suffers tremendously from typical CH peanut gallery commentary. Expect anywhere from 1/4 to 1/2 of a chapter with action to be made up of "noise" from the peanut gallery. If the author cut this down to a few lines and filled the rest of their word count with character development between the MC and him companions it would drastically increase the value of the novel. Now the MC is not very well fleshed out, the author has "alluded" to him having thoughts and a personality. However without his unspoken thoughts, the mc at ch 70 is just a mindless guy rushing to get all the benefits his future knowledge will allow. At this point this is just a moderately more interesting novel on this site. Hopefully the author can "breathe life" into the character interaction and the personality of the MC so the novel will not flop.