Review Detail of Space_river in Net Game: All My Pet Beasts Are Goddesses
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The story was interesting but if you want to skip I recommend you to do a small summary so we can understand. Like I lost you before level 15 anoumment, when is the guild made, what is the minimum number of members and how did he get a lot of enemies? Another way if you don't want to explain too much you can use '## days has past after enter the town....' like this some detail to connect the story. Also author you might want to check the chapter update from chapter 61 it go back to well chapter 51 again.
Net Game: All My Pet Beasts Are Goddesses
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I dropped at chapter 58... the amount of side characters thoughts is inane. this may as well be described as "people responding to the main character" The build up for each face slap is obvious and painful --so trite and generic that it's a relief when it's finally over. they just left the starting village got a new follower and picked up a quest at the guild forming town. new young master is grinding himself to dust before the MC who is enjoying a royal feast.