Review Detail of Tenkainijna in The Extra's Return
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I am the bone of my sword. Steel is my body, and fire is my blood. I have created over a thousand blades. Unaware of the beginning, Nor aware of the end. Withstood pain with inconsistent weapons, my hands will never hold anything. Yet, my flame never ends. My whole body was still Unlimited Blade Works.
The Extra's Return
Munruel
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That was what Archer says. What I say is: You are the bone of my body. Steel and fire are my spirits. You have created over a thousand supports. Unaware of the beginning. Nor aware of the end. Withstood pain with inconsistent updates, my hand will never hold anything. Yet, my fighting spirit never ends. You are still my unlimited readers.
Munruel:That was what Archer says. What I say is: You are the bone of my body. Steel and fire are my spirits. You have created over a thousand supports. Unaware of the beginning. Nor aware of the end. Withstood pain with inconsistent updates, my hand will never hold anything. Yet, my fighting spirit never ends. You are still my unlimited readers.
You have deleted all of your negative comments but I genuinely want a novel like this to succeed. My advice that I really think you should take is to just redo this whole novel. The introduction goes from 1 paragraph he dies from thugs next paragraph hes reborn as a noble and kicked out of his family and finally it ends with him meeting a woman named Cornelia. Flesh out your story we want details we want to know what the mc looks like how does the environment look like. I’d say take the time to flesh out your work because you have the right ideas and direction
I don't know yet. But I think it will take a while, but not too long. I plan to give him an identity other than trash noble. So that he can move more freely. Sort of like shadow-sama in The Eminence of Shadow anime, hehe. My inspiration btw. Other than that,
Rionn:Does he act weak for a long time? It’s the thing holding me back feom reading since I really dislike mc’s who act weak
that's not archers aria.. that's miyu verse, shiro emiya's aria.. yeah that's kinda sad. archers aria goes like thisI am the bone of my swordsteel is my body and fire is my bloodI have created over a thousand bladesunknown to lifenor known to deathI have withstood pain to create many weaponsyet theese hands shall never hold anythingso now, as I prayunlimited blade works.if that's not enough here is unlimited blade works shiro emiyas aria as well.I am the bone of my swordsteel is my body and fire is my bloodI have created over a thousand bladesunaware of lossnor aware of gainI have withstood pain to create weapons, waiting for one's arrivalthis is the only pathmy whole life was, unlimited blade works.