Author, I’m gonna tell it to you straight, but I’m about 150 chapters deep, and we don’t need so many R18 scenes, especially ones that are the same thing over and over and over again with a slight variation. It’s ok to just mention it happening in a sentence or 2, then move on. I think this is also really slowing down the story progression in comparison to the amount of chapters. Also, why do you keep using “well that will be a story for another time”. I’m not even half way through the book and it’s been used like 7 or 8 times XD
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