The story is very good however a issue I would have is that the author writes about stuff that could be skipped however it also makes you more immersed into the story plus I feel like you could speed a little bit of the story up unless you plan to write this story for a long time otherwise it’s not a issue!! Can someone tell me when he gets horals and Rita?
Barion_Trident
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LIKEAlright good cause I was wondering on how you were gonna do the story pace and yes when they first appear cause I can’t remember and I don’t feel like rereading right now till I can binge a lot of chapters
Barion_Trident:The story will be quite long since it is slow paced XD, as for Horals and Rita you mean the chapter where they first appear?
Divine_Crow:Alright good cause I was wondering on how you were gonna do the story pace and yes when they first appear cause I can’t remember and I don’t feel like rereading right now till I can binge a lot of chapters