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Divine_Crow
Divine_CrowLv131yrDivine_Crow

The story is very good however a issue I would have is that the author writes about stuff that could be skipped however it also makes you more immersed into the story plus I feel like you could speed a little bit of the story up unless you plan to write this story for a long time otherwise it’s not a issue!! Can someone tell me when he gets horals and Rita?

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Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System

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Barion_Trident
Barion_TridentAuthorBarion_Trident

The story will be quite long since it is slow paced XD, as for Horals and Rita you mean the chapter where they first appear?

Divine_Crow
Divine_CrowLv13Divine_Crow

Alright good cause I was wondering on how you were gonna do the story pace and yes when they first appear cause I can’t remember and I don’t feel like rereading right now till I can binge a lot of chapters

Barion_Trident:The story will be quite long since it is slow paced XD, as for Horals and Rita you mean the chapter where they first appear?
Barion_Trident
Barion_TridentAuthorBarion_Trident

Chapter 165, that's the first time they appeared but they didn't do anything back then

Divine_Crow:Alright good cause I was wondering on how you were gonna do the story pace and yes when they first appear cause I can’t remember and I don’t feel like rereading right now till I can binge a lot of chapters