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Review Detail of Mr_Morning_Star in Taken out for wsa2022!

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Mr_Morning_Star
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Writing Quality: It does not fall short to other novels, no punctuation errors and good paragraphing. Stability of Updates: Update wise it is very good managing to submit 30 chaps for the amount of time it's been out. Story Development: Story development feels a bit slow in the beginning but somehow got hold of my AD/HD affected brain. Character Design: The characters do not feel shallow and have certain spice on their own. World Background: The world needs a tad bit more explaining but overall it's very good. Definitely a must read! Cheers!

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Taken out for wsa2022!

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Thanks for your reviews! As for the world, I prefer opening the curtains slowly, and as for the slow beginning, this is the best beginning I ever made for this book xD