Review Detail of Dany_K_9260 in My Godly Ascension

Story and pass not bad. Decent world build, characters can go from being all over the place or feel 1d like 0-100 which is confusing. The most annoying thing though is too much unnecessary auntie notes/interjections, just be confident that readers can understand. And reduce all the stuff at end of each chapter, really sucks when you have speech on and it drags on endlessly