Review Detail of 1Sword2Peaks in My Godly Ascension

Item: My Godly Ascension
Rating: 5

Review detail

1Sword2PeaksLv32yr1Sword2Peaks

The characterisation of the different people appearing in this story is what sold me on it. The worldbuilding is good and the characters are enjoyable to read about. I think there are certain aspects of this story that could be done better, like the formatting of the text in some parts. However, other than that, it is a book with a lot of promise and I hope to see the author get even better in the future. Good luck, keep it up!

My Godly Ascension

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1Sword2PeaksLv31Sword2Peaks

Not all characters need to be 'I only help others if it benefits me' types.

Kw0z:Not sure how you can rate a story like this five stars. The main character is an idiot who’s way too kind to everyone.

1yr

ZherenLv13Zheren

more power stones people. we are getting less and less chapters.

1yr

ZherenLv13Zheren

more support more chapters.

1yr

Kw0zLv14Kw0z

Not sure how you can rate a story like this five stars. The main character is an idiot who’s way too kind to everyone.

1yr

Kw0zLv14Kw0z

I don’t care if he’s a good character. He just has the mindset of ‘Oh! She’s a female? Guess I gotta risk my life for her now!’

1Sword2Peaks:Not all characters need to be 'I only help others if it benefits me' types.

1yr

1Sword2PeaksLv31Sword2Peaks

Let him be a simp if he want to lol

Kw0z:I don’t care if he’s a good character. He just has the mindset of ‘Oh! She’s a female? Guess I gotta risk my life for her now!’

1yr