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Review Detail of CuriousEnigma in SPELLCRAFT: Reincarnation Of A Magic Scholar

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CuriousEnigma
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Currently read to chapter 212. Imma just list out stuff that bothered me. >MC already lived through his first life but is most definitely not acting his age. The constant st-t-tuttering is very annoying. There's no way someone lives that long and acts the way he does with females (that are kids by the way). The crying during the accident with his mom is awfully childish (not saying men shouldn't cry but come on "I'm sho shworry hic" 😐). >The situation with his mom. So she's an experienced mage but you're telling me she resorted to using the most advanced barrier spell there is instead of an intermediate one and sent herself to mana shock. Not only that but MC was forced to take the blame for it. Yeah, ok. It just seems like the author wanted to use this as a character development moment where the MC becomes a bit less arrogant and cares about others something but it was done terribly. >Spell ranks Ok so there's basic, intermediate, and advanced spells and the only other tier from that is original? That's very weird considering students can already perform Advanced spells. Is there no higher level? Transcendent spells? Higher? Weird system imo. >The discrimination I get it. It's a trope that stories with nobles tend to have some form of discrimination one way or another but this variation of it is very weird. It started off as a white core discrimination thing and then it turned to lower class discrimination. Why are they bent on being mad to something that's easily changed? From what I understand, White core turns to yellow core when you absorb mana. So does the discrimination stop once you hit yellow core or something? Like if the reason of discrimination was different then it would make sense lmao. Like if this was an rpg, it would make more sense to say "I hate warriors." than "I hate level 1s". >Introduction of Demons Honestly I didn't read far enough to care but for something that seems to be at the very least a mid boss, you introduced them awfully early. >The management is very questionable and interference is weird They nearly let jerry die because of the word from that Damien guy and MC's interference in the match is very hero complex-y. You start to wonder how the school is even running allowing stuff like this. And the management issue doesn't also work for the school but the Duke's family. Very sloppy way of dealing with an assassin. >Training of ana and ed Before the interclass tournament he trained ana and ed who were practically at the bottom of the barrel to rival stefan and maria from the upper class. That does not make sense lol. Them 2 months of growth surprised every other character's 12 years of training or however old they are. I can go on and on about how the world building is pretty much terrible, or how the personalities of some characters are annoying, or how the misunderstandings trope is tiring or how the martial artist abilities are skewed but I've rambled far enough. One good thing I'll say is that I did enjoy the magic system and it's interactions although it had its flaws.

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CuriousEnigma
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How tf do I space sentences out lol. Enter and shift enter don't work for what ever reason. Test. Test Test Test

Magecrafter
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Okay Debunking all this will take a lot of time. You’re wrong about a lot of things And I’m currently occupied with writing and some family matters. Thanks for speaking your mind and giving review, but my story doesn’t deserve this low rating. If you’re dissatisfied with it, then I’m sorry. Find a better story to read. Cheers.

CuriousEnigma
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We just hold different things as important when it comes to story telling 🤷🏽‍♂️ Thanks for reading that at least. Take with you what you will.

Magecrafter:Okay Debunking all this will take a lot of time. You’re wrong about a lot of things And I’m currently occupied with writing and some family matters. Thanks for speaking your mind and giving review, but my story doesn’t deserve this low rating. If you’re dissatisfied with it, then I’m sorry. Find a better story to read. Cheers.