I'm truly enjoying the novel so far! The only qualms I have is 1: strange arcs kinda just thrown in at random. 2: a few chapters are duplicated/in the wrong order 3: the most recent 35 chapters are all privilege (the most I've ever seen on any novel was 20 before this). I feel like if these are resolved/edited the story would flow smoother and be more enjoyable than it already is!
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