What you need to know before reading: - The protagonist is not super OP, reincarnated with SSS+ talent, he doesn't have a super strong system, he doesn't find a divine artifact that improves his body, he won't be the strongest in the kingdom in chapter 100... The protagonist reincarnates in a body with low talent for magic but, with his superior knowledge of the past life, he will surpass all others. - Because of the above, the pace of the story is a little slow, and that's fine with me. The protagonist's strength building is more realistic. He will also learn new things, after all he now has the theory and practice of magic. - The protagonist's personality is a bit arrogant... ...ok, fine! he is arrogant. But as the chapters go by, this characteristic diminishes and stays at a good level. After all, he reached the top of magical theories in his past life without having magic! So it's normal for him to be a little arrogant, isn't it? - From what I read, I believe that the protagonist is not a good guy and not a bad guy. I think he is aligned with the "neutral". If he has to kill, he will kill, but he's not a psychopath. - At the beginning of the work, the author is a little lacking in the physical descriptions of the characters, making it difficult and even impossible to visualize them mentally. His mother's mental image is a woman with big balloons where she suffocates the mc. Later the author improves in this area, so rest assured. - The protagonist will not be a lone wolf. He will have allies. Stay calm! They will not be burdens. - The writing is good. It is still necessary to know more things about the world... Cultures, regions, religions if they exist... I don't know if there are other races like elves, dwarves, etc, but it's at the beginning of the work so that's for later. - There are some "Slice of Life" parts in the story that are nice and funny. They help you relax a little and not overwhelm readers with information at all times. hmmm I think that's it for now. This review was based up to chapter 150. Keep up the good work, author. ^^
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RafaelMitz:btw, maybe it is advisable to change the cover of the book? As it is not a hot woman in lingerie showing off her curves, people may think that the girl is the protagonist of the work. I don't know, I could be talking nonsense.
real question here are you a retard by any chance? “Let’s have a random woman as the cover of my novel” “how could anyone possibly think she’s the mc”
Magecrafter:Hmm... you do have a point there. I'll look into that, thanks.
It's been a year since I wrote that so I've forgotten about the context, but I think it was some sort of joke.I think back then the book's cover was a girl (Ciara Epilson), so some people might have thought she was the MC And when the reader mentioned something and lingerie or something (which represents the kinds of book covers that were popular back then, and still are... though I don't use those kinds of covers), I think we were kidding around.It's been a while, so I can't quite remember the details.
Chatwriter:real question here are you a retard by any chance? “Let’s have a random woman as the cover of my novel” “how could anyone possibly think she’s the mc”image