Review Detail of RestingTree in SPELLCRAFT: Reincarnation Of A Magic Scholar

Good Story, a semi-cliché idea but still a very interesting one. The writing is good but the phrasing and how articulate the author can be is on the lower side, it fluctuates from being to casual to to formal, never really finding that sweet spot and never seeming quite right. Up to the max FREE chapters, its a nice casual read, but sadly, I personally wont be paying to read any further in. The story isn't very grabbing and the authors tendency (or maybe preference) to write a twist happening, and then an explanation story after, in a flash-back like way, simply doesn't work. Prime Example: He calls out a maid for being an assassin, and he talks about how he suspected her for a while now. You as the reader go; "WTF? This was literally never mentioned and he has never been shown to suspect anyone of literally any thing. " Then the next chapter is a head-ache inducing info-dump on how he suspected 3 people, and why, and how he confirmed it was her. This style of writing works well in full-length books, not chapter based novels where people need that information before the twist, or they wont know what's happening. And its especially jarring with the English-level often displayed. If the author reads this tl:dr; You have a good story, you have a good idea, your not bad at writing, but your English or the way you at least write it, is uncomfortable to read, your stories a bit to fast paced to ever actually care about any of the events, and it makes long events that you the author clearly cared about, such as the maid spy scene, seem way to long, as all your readers are people who liked your fast-paced back to back action. If you can, Id suggest getting an editor, and if you cant, possibly re-read the chapter before you upload it, and think "Does this sentence sound akward? " or " Does this flow well? ".