the story really has potential theres no grammar mistakes so its a smooth read, theres actual logic and reasoning behind how he uses his magic and combines spells etc. im writing this review at chap 31 so obviously there hasnt been a lot of progress but i do hope for more interactions with other characters who are also (hopefully) well written. for the other characters i mean not just dickriders also people who dislike him/ have business with him etc. overall grat potential def give it a read and i hope the updates keep coming steady
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yh no problem man but i did have a question though, is there gonna be romance ovbs you didnt put it in the tags so prob not but we can still pray for some romance in the story
Magecrafter:Thanks a lot for your honest review. I will try my hardest to keep up the quality and do even better.
shfl:yh no problem man but i did have a question though, is there gonna be romance ovbs you didnt put it in the tags so prob not but we can still pray for some romance in the storyimage
wow i kinda forgot about this story tbh bcs the chaps were priviliged but wow u wrote like alot of chaps good for u :)
Magecrafter:Maybe... haha. Certainly not the cliche or harem trope, but sure... I hope so too.