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Murphy_
Murphy_Author2yrMurphy_

10 chapters in and me reviewing on my fanfiction. Writing Quality - I would like to think that my writing Quality is up to par but... I really don't have many words in my English vocabulary. Sometimes, I use words repeatedly which lessens the immersion. (4/5) Story Development : I think I am doing good in that area. I am slowly diverging from the canon and I will also introduce some events due to butterfly effects soon. (5/5) Character Design : Hmmm...I don't know. I mean I would like to think my charcters to be three dimensional but it is still too soon to know. (4/5) Updating Stability - Atleast a chap per day. (5/5) World Background : It is a fanfiction regarding different worlds. In the weak hero world, I am explaining about the world properly and trying not to leave any plot holes. Still too soon to know (4/5) If you have any queries regarding anything related to my fanfiction, then you are free to ask. Thank you for reading!!!! (≧▽≦)

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Multiverse of Real-Life Manhwas

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Murphy_
Murphy_AuthorMurphy_

I am on a hiatus. Will start writing again from 1 June .

MarinXGrayfia:IT'S ALL LIE!!!!!! A CHAPTER A DAY, WHERE IS IT????!!!!
The_Anonymous_User
The_Anonymous_UserLv4The_Anonymous_User

harem?, after there are many beautiful female character in the manwha that i read and become fond of

Murphy_
Murphy_AuthorMurphy_

No Harem.

The_Anonymous_User:harem?, after there are many beautiful female character in the manwha that i read and become fond of
Ballad
BalladLv5Ballad

No Harem??? But it's Manhwas that's like the land of Beautiful Woman and NTR lol.

Murphy_
Murphy_AuthorMurphy_

Read the world hopping explanation.

Ballad:No Harem??? But it's Manhwas that's like the land of Beautiful Woman and NTR lol.
Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4Azathoth2

Finally a noharem fanfiction 😎 Thank you author-san

Murphy_:No Harem.
ManofcultureQ_Q
ManofcultureQ_QLv4ManofcultureQ_Q

U have no idea how much these two simple words mean to me author sama🥺🥺

Murphy_:No Harem.
MeepsNewGroove
MeepsNewGrooveLv4MeepsNewGroove

Ballad:No Harem??? But it's Manhwas that's like the land of Beautiful Woman and NTR lol.
hydrocyanic_acid
hydrocyanic_acidLv11hydrocyanic_acid

1 chap a week bro, you lyin

Murphy_
Murphy_AuthorMurphy_

That was me when I just started.

hydrocyanic_acid:1 chap a week bro, you lyin
UT_007
UT_007Lv13UT_007

Fanfics with no harem is like nightsky with no stars

Murphy_:No Harem.
M7TH1C
M7TH1CLv13M7TH1C

No ntr? I gotta ask because Korea Is on another level when It comes to ntr. Like this of Japan as a king or queen then think of korea as a god or goddess of ntr.

M7TH1C
M7TH1CLv13M7TH1C

Also WHo's the love intetsret?

M7TH1C
M7TH1CLv13M7TH1C

I suggest you swipe shelly, or the girl that's after vinny or the blue haired girl with tats. (If You do romance in wind breaker ). ALso can I ask what happened to the girl that went after vinny? I stopped reading wind breaker for it to stack up and still haven't read It. The last chapter I read was that rich guy that met with vinny's mother on the last panel.

Murphy_
Murphy_AuthorMurphy_

No NTR.

M7TH1C:No ntr? I gotta ask because Korea Is on another level when It comes to ntr. Like this of Japan as a king or queen then think of korea as a god or goddess of ntr.
Murphy_
Murphy_AuthorMurphy_

Idk bro. I don't remember much. Btw, the love interest is Shelly Scott.

M7TH1C:I suggest you swipe shelly, or the girl that's after vinny or the blue haired girl with tats. (If You do romance in wind breaker ). ALso can I ask what happened to the girl that went after vinny? I stopped reading wind breaker for it to stack up and still haven't read It. The last chapter I read was that rich guy that met with vinny's mother on the last panel.
Murphy_
Murphy_AuthorMurphy_

Well ok then. Consider this fanfic to be a 'nightsky without stars'.

UT_007:Fanfics with no harem is like nightsky with no stars
M7TH1C
M7TH1CLv13M7TH1C

Kinda feel bad for jay but she's hot so idrc

Murphy_:Idk bro. I don't remember much. Btw, the love interest is Shelly Scott.
hydrocyanic_acid
hydrocyanic_acidLv11hydrocyanic_acid

f you😭😭😭

Murphy_:That was me when I just started.
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Shashank_Poojary_5586
Shashank_Poojary_5586Lv4Shashank_Poojary_5586

hey will there be a chapter today

Shashank_Poojary_5586
Shashank_Poojary_5586Lv4Shashank_Poojary_5586

same bro I haven't read after that

M7TH1C:I suggest you swipe shelly, or the girl that's after vinny or the blue haired girl with tats. (If You do romance in wind breaker ). ALso can I ask what happened to the girl that went after vinny? I stopped reading wind breaker for it to stack up and still haven't read It. The last chapter I read was that rich guy that met with vinny's mother on the last panel.