Review Detail of Amatsu in I Keep Witches While Others Keep Dragons

The writing sucks, the chosen vocabulary sucks and sounds awfully like Machine translation of a chinese novel. A translators/editors job is to translte the text in its meaning and not word for word. You need ti convey the original meaning of the text so thst the target audience understands it. If you cant do that as a translator than you are not better than a machine translator