Review Detail of Davis111 in I Keep Witches While Others Keep Dragons

This needs a professional editor. The author will write a sentence where the 2nd half of the sentence totally contradicts the first. Many times I had to imitate Sherlock Holmes just to understand what the author was trying to get across.The reincarnation of the MC is filler, we get one sentence that alludes to it in the first ten chapters. There are a lot of abrupt scene changes and numerous times the author could have expounded on things that were interesting, but didn't. The premise and the character's thoughts/personality are especially appealing to me, pity that there is so much wrong with the novel.