Review Detail of Matthew_Gooche in Strongest Mage with the Lust system

The protagonist is brash, brainless and boring. He acts like a child, the romance is frankly sickening, and he seems far to concerned with everyone around him. Too selfless and stupid for his own good. Pacing is slow, and the writing is too diluted, paragraphs of writing to explain the smallest details, every explanation is superfluous, and leaves nothing to be assumed. Mind you, the protagonist's lack of intelligence does influence this greatly, as he seems unable to discern even the most obvious of details. No redeeming factors, the author is a terrible writer, stop supporting this piece of trash. I don't even care much for character development, but it's evident the author is either a child or a moron, he is wholly unable to portray any adult.