Review Detail of Darcy_Rose3 in Torrent of Shadows

Hello elements! This is the author. I hope you're enjoying my book. Seeing as this is my first serious attempt at writing a webnovel, I am very nervous and still have a lot to learn. Thus any constructive criticism is greatly appreciated! Here are some helpful things to my current social media pages, where I post some occasional stuff: Tumblr: https://darcyrose-here.tumblr.com/ (with a ton of tiny lore bits) Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100082620412235