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Review Detail of Tolgasah in The Reality Game

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Tolgasah
TolgasahLv112yrTolgasah

Read all 86 chapter in a day, thrilling story. I clicked on this just because author said that they were inspired by 48 Hour a Day, which I really liked. Shortly if you like world hopping and character improvement kinda stories really give this a chance. Currently on chapter 86 and is good. Following is really long and I am gonna write what I liked and also didn't. Personally I didn't like: Some chapters were mixed up and some typos here and there. Sometimes I miss the time in story, it suddenly been 2 months for example. Characters are kinda bland and simple, currently only thing I know is mc is poor and a smart and studious student. Not that we need everyone at the level of Shakespeare but yeah, characters a bit weak currently. What I liked: The genre is one I like. Currently it is in the second "world" and till now story is very thrilling. Feels like an action movie and it was fun. Also don't mind that here is a lot less things than what I didnt like, this book is really good. Compared to some other things on webnovel that's about building a harem in some other world, with broken powers that author probably didn't even think on for more than 3 seconds and some stupid edgy teenager mc. Weirdly all of them have more than 4.5 points but whatever. This one compared to them is 6 out of 5, no cap. If you like world hopping and character improvement kinda stories really give this a chance.

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CalebChris
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I really appreciate your insight sincerely! As per your review about the typos, It was a terrible mistake. My Grammaly kind of messed up while I was making some corrections to my draft, but this has nothing to do with my negligence to my writing. Again, thank you for the review. I will personally make sure that I fix these issues mentioned.