Review Detail of Austin_Harrison in The Heir To Oblivion

Hola, Hombres. This is my first original novel, and I worked on it for about eight months before release. There will be mistakes, of that I'm sure. So if you'll be kind enough to point them out, then that would be pretty cash money. This novel is inspired by many other works, but the two biggest ones are "Reborn: Evolving From Nothing" by AuthorWiz, and "The Way Of Kings" by Brandon Sanderson. I'm sure most have at least heard of these books, but if not then I recommend them wholeheartedly. Both works are incredible, and I can only hope to reach a fraction of their greatness. Anyway, enjoy the novel!