Review Detail of Taimur_Ali in Marvel: Reborn

the author doesn't truly understand the source material. he doesn't understand what character development and story design and development is. I was hoping for a good si, but the main character is an idiot who follows the direction of his system that's not a system. he has spider powers but for some reason needs to concentrate and gather ki or something to use a natural ability like strength. also the author keeps hyping on about the intelligence of the mc without showing anything. and the author can get as angry as he wants, but his writing is very much along the lines of how he probably talks. the story is really disappointing and author doesn't take criticism well. that's the only reason I'm writing a review. and I'm still being generous.