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Review Detail of EvilBlueCrystal in Reverend Insanity - Verdant Heart Seed

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EvilBlueCrystal
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Started off good, but quickly become a tedious and lackluster story. The initial interest surrounding the characters dissappeared as they lost any semblance of meaning and personality, making it hard to even recognize them among the multitude of randomly appearing individuals. The protagonist, who was previously rank 8, literally does nothing of interest after being reincarnated. The lack of new Gu worms in a supposedly big city, coupled with the protagonist's many inheritances that only end up being sold into auction, but only few Gu worms are shown, that either fade into obscurity or have no impact on the plot whatsoever. Despite having good opportunities to advance, he continually chooses the most mundane and illogical ways, devoid of any planning or strategy. For countless chapters, he struggles to make any progress in adjusting his Dao marks or awakening his aperture, and not refining anything, resorting to a risky and seemingly pointless methods. However, conveniently, when the plot demands it, he suddenly becomes capable of doing the impossible. The absence of descriptions of the locations, environment, and people, as a result the world-building suffers. Each passing chapter is more boring, further into aimlessness, devoid of any structure. The protagonist's limited schemes, his strategies lack depth and planning, from basic backstabbing or risky and unsatisfying decisions that result in his death. The initially slow pacing, becomes inconsistent, dragging the narrative into a tiresome monotonous cultivation and drawn-out explanations about the Gu system, where he sits as a tree all day helping some traitor who killed his brother.

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Reverend Insanity - Verdant Heart Seed

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ThunderTaters
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Sorry I couldn't fulfill your desire for instant gratification.

Brendan_Cruse
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The major thing I find tedious is the pacing.

Brendan_Cruse
Brendan_CruseLv11Brendan_Cruse

I found it enjoyable otherwise

Brendan_Cruse:The major thing I find tedious is the pacing.