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OVERLOAD69
OVERLOAD69Author2yrOVERLOAD69

I am giving it 5 stars cause I wrote it. I'll write a proper review later because we aren't that far into the story so don't mind it and read

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DIDN'T ASK FOR THIS.

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OVERLOAD69
OVERLOAD69AuthorOVERLOAD69

nope.

Rionn:Ntr? Yuri?
DaoistvHZFlH
DaoistvHZFlHLv1DaoistvHZFlH

Since he is the author of My Second Life in Another World, I start reading without thinking.

Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv11Spelloyal

At least put in the synopsis about which anime is the fanfic or some of the crossovers if that's the case.

OVERLOAD69
OVERLOAD69AuthorOVERLOAD69

we haven't reached to the point where the characters are introduced. so spoiling it would be no fun. I'll make an auxiliary chapter to put in the characters that are introduced with their source.

Spelloyal:At least put in the synopsis about which anime is the fanfic or some of the crossovers if that's the case.
Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv11Spelloyal

So it's a crossovers between several works? Putting this in the synopsis helps a lot. I understand that you want to avoid spoilers, but without having an idea of what to expect, it's difficult to know if it's a fanfic about a work or genre that the reader (me) finds interesting. all its synopsis says is that it's a fanfic about a reincarnated warrior, it doesn't even say if it's action, slice of life or romance. This is not enough for the synopsis of an original work, much less a fanfic where it is sometimes necessary to be a little clearer about what the work is about, since most people don't read a fanfic about an anime they haven't watched or liked.

OVERLOAD69:we haven't reached to the point where the characters are introduced. so spoiling it would be no fun. I'll make an auxiliary chapter to put in the characters that are introduced with their source.
OVERLOAD69
OVERLOAD69AuthorOVERLOAD69

ok then I'll edit the synopsis then.

Spelloyal:So it's a crossovers between several works? Putting this in the synopsis helps a lot. I understand that you want to avoid spoilers, but without having an idea of what to expect, it's difficult to know if it's a fanfic about a work or genre that the reader (me) finds interesting. all its synopsis says is that it's a fanfic about a reincarnated warrior, it doesn't even say if it's action, slice of life or romance. This is not enough for the synopsis of an original work, much less a fanfic where it is sometimes necessary to be a little clearer about what the work is about, since most people don't read a fanfic about an anime they haven't watched or liked.
Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv11Spelloyal

I reread my comments and I think I was a little harsh. It was meant to be advice and came out more as a requirement, sorry about that.

OVERLOAD69:ok then I'll edit the synopsis then.
OVERLOAD69
OVERLOAD69AuthorOVERLOAD69

it os alright I write it so you guys can read it so if there are problem that affect your experience it is alright to say it. and i am really bad at writing a synopsis.

Spelloyal:I reread my comments and I think I was a little harsh. It was meant to be advice and came out more as a requirement, sorry about that.
HONOR
HONORLv4HONOR

I need an everyday update🙏😎

RuberDF
RuberDFLv5RuberDF

Is the MC Adam Jensen? lol

Evade
EvadeLv4Evade

You should focus on this novel than the solo leveling, since the mc here would have so much character development to improve, i also like the fleshing out of the characters here at the moment than the other novel. cheers mate hope you keep on improving, also like this better that the solo leveling fic mc.

OVERLOAD69
OVERLOAD69AuthorOVERLOAD69

I can't focus on anything at the moment as I can't move my hand and am bed ridden.... Sigh it is difficult to even type something I can only binge some anime at the moment.

Evade:You should focus on this novel than the solo leveling, since the mc here would have so much character development to improve, i also like the fleshing out of the characters here at the moment than the other novel. cheers mate hope you keep on improving, also like this better that the solo leveling fic mc.
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Evade
EvadeLv4Evade

Woa, Sorry about that. Take care of yourself then man, we could wait. bless you with fast recovery.

OVERLOAD69:I can't focus on anything at the moment as I can't move my hand and am bed ridden.... Sigh it is difficult to even type something I can only binge some anime at the moment.
Chaos_Order8
Chaos_Order8Lv4Chaos_Order8

Hi author san👋, it's me DIO HAHAHA 😅 Jokes aside, can you tell us (readers) what can we expect from your fanfic, what I mean mainly will it be Short, medium,or long story, I definitely vote for the later jejejejeje, anyway..Thanks author for the great work I love it👌❤️

OVERLOAD69
OVERLOAD69AuthorOVERLOAD69

this one can be a long one but I'll write it later as I can't focus on two books at the same time.

Chaos_Order8:Hi author san👋, it's me DIO HAHAHA 😅 Jokes aside, can you tell us (readers) what can we expect from your fanfic, what I mean mainly will it be Short, medium,or long story, I definitely vote for the later jejejejeje, anyway..Thanks author for the great work I love it👌❤️
Luthion
LuthionLv2Luthion

Could you continue this story on Novelbin? Pls

Mr_hypocrite
Mr_hypocriteLv4Mr_hypocrite

lemons? ??

OVERLOAD69
OVERLOAD69AuthorOVERLOAD69

there will be some down the line,

Mr_hypocrite:lemons? ??
Shepi203
Shepi203Lv1Shepi203

when will you update the next chapter?

OVERLOAD69
OVERLOAD69AuthorOVERLOAD69

after My Second life in another world is completed.

Shepi203:when will you update the next chapter?
Rionn
RionnLv15Rionn

Ntr? Yuri?

OVERLOAD69:after My Second life in another world is completed.