Review Detail of JJ_Prakoso in Delllleted

Here are my honest thoughts about this novel, I think The main character for me is quite okay for me right now. He is not too bratty and whine to almost everything. I also like he also quite brave to stand up against his bully. However, there are issues regarding Alexander Characterization and here is the list that can be improve: - I think you can give him more build up or information before he receiving the system -You also can maybe showing more interaction between his parent before they die. Maybe you can give more flashback or an interaction before they finally died. Oka let's move on to the world building, for me the world building is quite decent maybe. Yes it set to the modern world which I already have a clear picture of it, but there are certain area that can be improved: - The Author maybe can give a little bit hint or more description of the surroundings. - The author can also at least mention of how the people see and react to this certain things such as the system or some mystical monster that suddenly appeared. As for the pace, I do have a problem, especially with Chapter 1 and Chapter 2. Sorry to say this, it felt that the chapter belong to the middle part of the story or should I say the origin of how the character got that power. Therefore my only suggestion is slowing down the pace...I guess like properly introduce the main Character either interacting with his parents before they died. Another suggestion is maybe the author can give a chapter about flashbacks before the incident especially for the continuation of the book. It could flesh out the Main Character even more and their parents too. However, there are some good things in this novel too: - The side character is mostly decent and have their own traits - The writing is mostly very smooth, clean, and precise in my opinion. Overall that's all I have to say about this novel that have a great potential. Thus good luck and keep up the good work