Review Detail of LinhMieu in My Goalkeeping System
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Sorry but dropping it early. The novel has a lot of fillers and it feels like the author is underestimating soccer players too much or the mc is just trash. First, the task given is 2km running, drink 2 litters, Spend 2 hours in the gym. The mc [author] created a loophole and not realizing it, just run 2km in the gym and gets double reward but nope. Also, a soccer player can run around 6 to 8.5 miles per game or 9.7km to 13km. I understand that the mc is a goalkeeper but 2km is ridiculously low for the mc to whine about how hard it is. Btw, I understand that the latter chapters may be better but not all reader willing to go through almost 20+ chapters of mediocre writing to get there. Anyway good luck.
My Goalkeeping System
Franklin_Nwakamma
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Beu I just never get it why the Author understand this fact from writing experience and from a Reader’s perspective too but still make the first 20 chapters be 95% fillers with a good for nothing lazy Mc that complains and plays the Victim card without trying hard to get better. Its probably thats why the Mc was such a loser before and even more so clear after getting the system. Even I who has never played pro and did it as hobby as I was younger put more effort not to mention the Mc that getting paid for his trash goalkeeping
Franklin_Nwakamma:I love the fact that you were nice and still made your point clear, you're right, the earlier chapters are way too mediocre but I'm working on tweaking them, I'm not planning on leaving them like that, glad you gave it a try.