Review Detail of Simone_Intelmann in The Substitute Bride and the Cripple

Item: The Substitute Bride and the Cripple
Rating: 5

Review detail

Simone_IntelmannLv151yrSimone_Intelmann

i had read about a 1/3 and wanted to read the rest of the book so bad that i have been chipping at a few chapters a paycheck :) i finished it before i got out of bed this morning. great story. i love how you write!

The Substitute Bride and the Cripple

Night Breeze

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MiizStudzLv14MiizStudz

I would have enjoyed a money ending though, the him revealing himself was very underwhelming. seems like all the stories like this have ending to rushed. like the author decided to get it out with lol . atleast not a ton of plot holes and unanswered questions like some of them .

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