Review Detail of Street_Rider_5870 in Becoming a Monster

I don't understand why many people are complaining. Author, I think your novel is a breath of fresh air among all the harem/R18/Bang girls with my system trash that are coming out these days. I like the story, though a bit cliche, it is well done. The characters are good. I would suggest you speed up the progression time a bit, cuz the first 100 chapters talk about the events happening in the same day. This could also clear up the mobs showing up again with their similar dialogues. The grammar is good and the world background for now is simple, which is good because it has only been about 2 or 3 days since the story started, why do we want to know about situations in other parts of the world so soon. Keep writing. Good job.