Review Detail of Ruruabaka in Becoming a Monster

My thoughts on this work are .....................wait for it.... wait for it......... for it........ it needs a lot of work, as other people have said, there are definite homophobic undertones in the novel, likely trying to spread some kind of agenda writing quality is not great updates not good development is poor, went nowhere character design is the worst though, personality all over the place definite simp background nonexistent story has potential though, keep it up!