Review Detail of DaoistybPkir in Becoming a Monster

Bro u should read mtl. After that u would know wht is bad Grammar

It would be nice if people point out the bad grammar otherwise what do I have to improve on? Also it’s not like I get paid enough to get an editor, would you like to be my editor for free?

Author is also extremely childish, in my review, author felt so offended he switched to the most obvious alt account to attack me. It has one 5 star review of this novel and one comment attacking me.

You are the definition of an internet warrior,go to books leaving insults then cry wolf when it gets flipped back on you lol and I’m confused bc I read one book that make me an alt account lol

Still using the Alt..I really hope you find peace one day, if you want to become a writer, you'll need to learn how to take criticism one day. Attacking your readers, acting like you know what a word means and using it in an attack when it means something completely different is embarrassing. Using an obvious alternate account which only existed to leave a review when this novel came out and now using it attack reviewers is also extremely cringeworthy. Please look into meditation to still the mind and heart.

CAN SOMEONE PLEASE explain to me why the one of author's alt Sith_Cloud is going around being an aggressive homophobe? His alt account which he basically flat out admins to only reviews and comments against readers posts "boyfriend" like the ultimate insult and misuses the word simp over and over, this toxic attitude is disgusting.

We can ofcourse point out bad grammar( of we want that is) , i though believe with more writing you will get better at grammar, its understandably hard if english is your second lang. ( It is so for me atleast) But author its ,,your job” to do that - we are readers of your publicly released novel ,not your personal script. I guess we are supposed to read your book , and depending on how we like it we rate it , review it ,continue reading , give gifts and on the other hand if we dont like it review it how we see it , to give an honest review ( tho it may be hard to read). Good wishes , its enjoyable book :)