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Daoist705479
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10 chapters in and story seems interesting but the constant mistakes of mixing up he/she his/her, well gender in general is getting really bad and makes it hard to enjoy the story

King of Succubus [Rewrite]

Golden_Raise

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Golden_Raise
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The chapters are being corrected. Regarding the plot of the story, the mc will not remain a naive idiot for the rest of the time I just add this aspect to make the change of the mc personality more realistic and vigorous. I'm sure if you continue to chapter 40 you'll see what I wanted to tell you about[img=recommend]

Daoist705479
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If the mistakes are being corrected then there is no complaint on that front. About the plot or characters I didn't have any complaints. About the "read to ch 40 to see that it gets better" it isn't sound as an argument( currently there are only 44 chapters) because one should read because the story is good, not to see that it gets better, but this is just me being nitpicky, not something related to the book

Golden_Raise
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There will be one chapter a day, it's just that I have to make some improvements to the previous chapters, such as correcting some errors and trying to make the plots more interesting. As for your concerns with the number of chapters, you don't have to worry about it... I have more than two hundred chapters in stock! Currently, I am in my 234th chapter and they will be published very soon without fail!

Daoist705479:If the mistakes are being corrected then there is no complaint on that front. About the plot or characters I didn't have any complaints. About the "read to ch 40 to see that it gets better" it isn't sound as an argument( currently there are only 44 chapters) because one should read because the story is good, not to see that it gets better, but this is just me being nitpicky, not something related to the book