Review Detail of Jude_K_1656 in Heaven's Flame

I find this creation interesting to read, with a great scenarios for every chapters. You can love the FL's character, a fighter one which makes the story runs quite well. In the traditional world of publishing, narration always in the past tense and the dialogue in the present tense, plus you need some proofreading and add appropriate punctuation marks, though I could say that it never affect the interest of the story. A great read for everybody