Review Detail of Excelsior_x in Heaven's Flame

Great world building. The story line is well written that it matures like fine wine as you read the next chapter lol. The author knows how to present her vision in words and that helps you see the world through their eyes. The characters are relatable. The grammar is quite good, the only issue I might have is that the paragraphs are bulky but the way the story is told it does not take anything away from it. A good read