Review Detail of Excelsior_x in His Unyielding Obsession

This review is after having read the few chapters that have been published and I have to say I already love the Plot. The relationship between Nadia and Emily seems genuine and interesting. For me the story kicks of in chapter two when more characters are introduced. I Think my favorite character is going to be Mario, he sounds to be a trouble maker and it seems like Ajax will have to put a leash on him. The grammar is great, only a few miners that you hardly notice. A good story that I'm interested to see how it develops through the next chapters.