Review Detail of CliffkunLolRekt in Living In The Nightmare

Copy pasted this i messaged you as i was not shure if you will even see a comment considering you have not commented in a long ass time on any outher novel Suggestion for your highschool dxd Fanfic ive Not read Yet have there be safe zones that zombies avoid that lasts a week that has a golden Glowing mist That heals humans and kills zombies And yeets out anyone that tries to kill or rape or has eaten anouther human out of desperation And if you feel like it you can have a tablet/monolith that spawns that can give someone a power like fire manipulation or a minor stat boost that ups there survivability Or just make them run slightly faster with eventually haveing to leave the safe zone and a new zone the blessings will eventually pile up and increse the survival rate You can also have a red monolith that looks like A mix of blood and ruby that can give a random mutation thats benifitial like two more arms or Better eyes grey skin that is hard to pierce extra joint in your legs that help with running Ect If you are a cod zombies player you coukd even add a mystery box that works one time per Person for every safe zone Every safe zone gives them anouther chance With a small chance for anyone to get a wonder wepon as more safe zones pop up more variaty of wonder wepons will be introduced This would be very interesting if you do decide to add this You could add a glowing fruit that Wont spoil can give temporary Imunity to zombies and there bites that will kill any virus in there body for a few weeks any bite that happens wont turn someone and if your about to turn and eat one they will go into a coma for a week and wont be turned they will wake up helthy hence you can clutch save someone You can juce it and put it in a bottle for a quick save