Review Detail of Adrian_Yanez_3288 in Fate: Dead Man's Lament [Rewrite Up]

I'm rewriting the whole thing with a different system.

Man, I was waiting for the chappy to stockpile so that I can binge read it....

DML was at least completed, would you consider putting it back up with something like (Non-canon - read the rewrite)?

que susto, yo ni lo termine

cool but man pls dont make the mc edgy like this one and rember that gaia is responsible for giving fuel for divinity so there are no new divinity in fate as gaia has stoped the divinity and now focusing on the dead apostels. and a important point nearly all fan fic writers forget is that there can`t be a acophora event in fyuki because there the ley line is small and it cant support a acophora. like if the grail war is delayed and occurs at normal time instead of the early time then the energy from incomplete 3rd war and a full stock for 4th war might be enough for a greater war