Review Detail of Efthee in Another Chance in the World of Remnant

Great fic, loved the rwby part but this fate part is just a bunch of nonsense full of plot holes, who was the random isekai character and how did he show up in remnant (not to mention the nonsense of a system power to transport a person to whole another universe), why include fate storyline without finishing rwby storyline? I am just waiting for this fate part to end and him to go back to remnant now.