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you have some potential. but you need to read more you make rookie mistakes and commit so many clichés it physically hurt to read your work. read 100 of the top harry potter fanfiction. plus the books again the attempt this again
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sorry I didn't see your comment till now . "honour thy blood". "make a wish by rorschachs blot" and I read it a long time ago but "thanks to a snake" is quite balanced. I would recommend taking time to read serious and humorous story's evenly or you will burn yourself out .
Chris2121:can you recommend to me some hp fanfic?