Review Detail of Raging_Waves in Dragon ball human Reborn

This is as of now my favorite dragonball fic on this site/app. it has attained my praise due to relatively compotent storytelling which is a rarity here. the main character scaling is almost perfect, as in how long it takes to gain power is not overly exaggerated. The pacing is a bit fast as in how fast they reach places around the globe and plenty of time skips. But this is excused by it being early dragonball retelling exactly a master trains someone for a better part of a year would be a slog. The character design is good but seeing as this author only had to make a few new characters so far I cant really judge that. what I can judge is how close the author comes to recreating the characters original personalities from the source material which I have no complaints about. I.E. roshi acts mostly like roshi would, krillin acts mostly how krillin would, etc...The world background is no different from the original show so I cannto credit this author for that as that goes yo akira toriyama , as a result if i could give that portion a 2.5 i would. every chapter is exciting to read and I think this is really good work.👍