The story is well-written and not fast paced. It has elements of slice and life in it that you will definetely love. As always, a problem with slice and life is the lack of conflict. However, the author already foreshadowed that there would be inner conflict within the characters that will arise. I am looking forward to that. The idea is interesting, yet the lack of chapters set it back from being a proper execution. The MC can interact with the fourth wall, but what does interacting with the fourth wall actually do? why should he continue to do so? is the fourth wall even important to the story?
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