The MC's personality is kind of obnoxious who srsly talks a lot when it comes to advising and his personal philosophy. Reminds me of the mcs from hp fanfics who would be in ravenclaw. The story development as of now is following the canon and there are no issues with grammar. Overall it's a good read.
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LIKEBeaulenSmith:Yeah, the obnoxiousness and the talking a lot is purely because I'm still trying to get better at writing.
BeaulenSmith:Yeah, the obnoxiousness and the talking a lot is purely because I'm still trying to get better at writing.