Review Detail of Common_Weeb in From Common Weeb to Abyss Lord
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Okay. As a fan fiction writer, I will start the review trend here. For what I'm about to write, let's talk about the premise of this work. This work is a 'power fantasy,' 'another world' fan fiction, so it contains the typical clichés and tropes commonly used in this kind of work. This includes how the main character, who is a shut-in and somewhat perverted weeb getting isekai-ed as Kousuke Endou, is 'lucky' and always able to overcome the problems he faced, no matter how difficult the problems. He'd struggle, sure! But, he would surpass it later! Of course, the main character would deal with all those problems! After all, he is the main character! In addition, the main character would also develop as a character, probably. At least, I planned something like that. Therefore, the main character started off as a typical loser with delusions of grandeur. Next and the last topic I'd write there, it's about the pairing. Looks like the pairing for male lead has become a major selling point in a fan fiction lately, I noticed! This fan fiction isn't different. The main character wanted to have a harem like any isekai protagonist in fan fiction he'd read, but it was up to the future whether he could get a harem or stayed with his OTP, who was Yue/Aleytia. Anyway, that's what I wanted to share in this without giving too much spoilers. Now, I hope the others would leave their constructive or informative reviews for those who interested in this fan fiction. Thank you. . . . Sincerely, Common Weeb
From Common Weeb to Abyss Lord
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Well, I never made it clear if he'd develop into a character with a good or bad moral. I've only written he'd develop into something great. No spoilers, okay!
strowmax321:personally I think you should make your protagonist darker more evil those are the best protagonists that exist (according to me)
Well, I hope you don't give too much relevance to Hajime and also don't let him fall into the abyss. ( Translate
Common_Weeb:Well, I never made it clear if he'd develop into a character with a good or bad moral. I've only written he'd develop into something great. No spoilers, okay!
MaTachin:is that yue on the cover pic? how tf she become a hot grill lolimage
I don't add 'harem' tag because I, myself, am uncertain. On the one hand, I want it to be a wholesome OTP with Yue. On the other hand, MC is somewhat perverted and delusional wanting a harem, and the world of Arifureta itself is trying to get the significant character to get a harem. Oh well, we'll see in the future how it'll turn out.
Devilngle:author if you think of starting Harem please add tag so harem fans notice
Common_Weeb:I don't add 'harem' tag because I, myself, am uncertain. On the one hand, I want it to be a wholesome OTP with Yue. On the other hand, MC is somewhat perverted and delusional wanting a harem, and the world of Arifureta itself is trying to get the significant character to get a harem. Oh well, we'll see in the future how it'll turn out.
Just read all chapters released so far, and I thinks it‘s impossible for the Mc to be loyal only to Yue… I think a Harem of 3-5 is acceptable, you just need to show their development properly. Also you could add a one night stand at the castle with one of the maids or the librarian before he goes to Orcus P.S.: Release more chapters Slave-Tan!
Common_Weeb:I don't add 'harem' tag because I, myself, am uncertain. On the one hand, I want it to be a wholesome OTP with Yue. On the other hand, MC is somewhat perverted and delusional wanting a harem, and the world of Arifureta itself is trying to get the significant character to get a harem. Oh well, we'll see in the future how it'll turn out.
Common_Weeb:I don't add 'harem' tag because I, myself, am uncertain. On the one hand, I want it to be a wholesome OTP with Yue. On the other hand, MC is somewhat perverted and delusional wanting a harem, and the world of Arifureta itself is trying to get the significant character to get a harem. Oh well, we'll see in the future how it'll turn out.
Yes. It'll be a complex harem structure. As in, Yue will be the main wife, and the rest is just a concubines/mistresses.
RealMainCharacter:considering you put harem tag...so it's certain now?