I mean I really like the concept and the idea... But Holy Moly is this fic unreadable! () marks are used instead of "". No change in paragraphs even before or after dialogues. So many grammatical errors. I really want to read this, but I don't think I can unless the grammar and writing is fixed.
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LIKEWell I know... But even if I ignore the grammatical errors. The way the paragraphs are divided or how the thoughts and the speeches are broken make it really tedious to read.
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