Review Detail of UndeadBeing in Parallel Timeline: Time Loop Rebel
Review detail
Writing Quality: 3 stars because story is way too slow and the synopsis made it seem like he was in an uncontrollable loop which was a new interesting topic but, guess we can't all get new concepts. Stability of Updates: as always is 3 stars Story Development: 1 star I can't be bothered to read 5 chapters and have only 1 chapter worth of "action" or whatever this was called Character Design: 2 stars He's emotionally unstable, has no understanding of transmigration, he's managed to give me an even worse headache than Qidian novels, the transmigration understandment I could possibly pass but he's way too stupid to figure out what to even do in this world and it took him 3 tries just to get out of his starting point without getting caught. So character is basically worthless... World Background: 1 star it was abysmal when we even get anything worthwhile, we don't even have a reason to care since it was just thrown at us on the spur of 1 conversation with a driver. I don't mean to put you down author but I couldn't read this even at gunpoint. To finalize this review, The writing was terribly paced and it made 5 chapters feel like 1, story development again was 5-1 chapter ratio, character design was unlikeable in every aspect (imo,) and barely any world info.
Parallel Timeline: Time Loop Rebel
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Are you serious? Are you telling me you left this review after reading five fucking chapters? That pissy little amount does not give you an accurate grasp on any novel. This review is way too harsh even if you had read 10 chapters. If you find the story dull then feel free to not read it but don’t leave a review that is most likely bullshit and contains zero facts. If it is accurate then I apologise but I highly doubt it.
Wow, you are rude. No, I'd rather not read something this dull, no matter how biased the readers are. I said what I wanted to say, and I don't care if you're hurt that your favorite book wasn't to my liking. Since you don't seem to think my claims are correct, then I'll give you reasons; the beginning is too slow for my taste, The character seems idiotic to the point of asking people about multiversal(is that even a word?) things to a random stranger he met 20 seconds ago, the system part of it is cliché, the author can't do correct math. The synopsis made it seem like it was something new, the world background, as far as I've read, was trash. You're entitled to your opinion, but I've already said I wouldn't read this dumpster fire half-system misleading slow-paced novel with an added dumb MC. If you were to have taken my review at face value, you would know my tastes vary from yours. Just cause I don't like reading terrible novels that take way too long for the action to show doesn't mean I should be forced to read said trash novel so you can get as much gratification of being "correct" in what you assume to be an incorrect opinion. When the readers are as toxic and rude as you are, it makes me want to be rude too, but when you add that this novel has done everything incorrectly, you get a novel who's readers are almost as bad as the actual reading experience. Please shut up and stop trying to do something to correct me; I won't be responding to idiots like you any further, it's a one and done most of the time, I'd rather not have to stoop to your level of idiocy to argue on opinions that are different. If that's all, but we both know I won't respond anymore after this, would you kindly never talk or type directly towards me again?
64bites:did you read only 5 chapters? Pffftt Everything gets more interesting as the chapters go on. All your descripts about the story are wrong, if you read more chapters you will undertand that.