Review Detail of JohnnyReever in Reborn as a warp god with a warp system in Warhammer 40k
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The story idea is good. This Idea is seldom used. But in all honesty ,it’s unreadable at the moment. There are no punctuations and the grammar is all over the place. It’s hard to make heads or tales of what’s happening.
Reborn as a warp god with a warp system in Warhammer 40k
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JohnnyReever:I stuck through the first six chapters. Let's see where this goes 🤷🏾
JohnnyReeverLv5JohnnyReever
And trying is what’s important. Take what criticisms you get and discern the required facts from it and improve. English suggest using grammarly or google documents. They will help with spellings and grammatical mistakes a lot. I use it as well. I go through each written chapter four times before posting it. Even then I miss some mistakes. You know what they say. If you don’t make mistakes, you haven’t tried it yet.
Dez_Burns:I am new to this i am doing my best
JohnnyReeverLv5JohnnyReever
JohnnyReever:And trying is what’s important. Take what criticisms you get and discern the required facts from it and improve. English suggest using grammarly or google documents. They will help with spellings and grammatical mistakes a lot. I use it as well. I go through each written chapter four times before posting it. Even then I miss some mistakes. You know what they say. If you don’t make mistakes, you haven’t tried it yet.