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Review Detail of Erikbongo in You Think I Won't Talk?

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Im a little over 90 chapters in so far. The writing quality is smooth, story is interesting, most of the relevant characters are well written, the world background is excellent and the updating stability is good. My only real gripe is with the writing style. At first the antics of the main character was funny, but it now feels overplayed. I really want the story to progress but it feels sort of stuck due to the inside monologue. The serious talk is very engaging but the jokes start up again the very next sentence. I must state however, that the reason I want the story to move forward is because I like it so much. Its very good. The only criticism i have about any character is that the mother and sister feel a little unreal with how stereotypical they are, especially so since all the other characters are so well written. It slightly ruins my immersion. Overall the story is very unique when compared to other stories ive read. Totally would recommend giving it a read.

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