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LazyCorpz
LazyCorpzLv112yrLazyCorpz

I feel like the author tried to "install" the cheat creatively, but failed. .

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Master Of Martial Arts Has An Advanced Optical Brain

Eight O'clock At Night

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LazyCorpz
LazyCorpzLv11LazyCorpz

Ok. The biggest plot hole here is his cheat. How did he get it? Why doesn't he care? If the AI is already done, can other people use it to(through cameras and other devices) improve martial arts? Otherwise, its fine. The MC's character for first 20 chapters has remained consistent. Not much world building yet.

Drarmha
DrarmhaLv11Drarmha

It must be the unknown data code that was said by 'Mu Yutong'

LazyCorpz:Ok. The biggest plot hole here is his cheat. How did he get it? Why doesn't he care? If the AI is already done, can other people use it to(through cameras and other devices) improve martial arts? Otherwise, its fine. The MC's character for first 20 chapters has remained consistent. Not much world building yet.
LazyCorpz
LazyCorpzLv11LazyCorpz

I know. But then tthats very convenient way to close off a plot hole. Thats why I said that the author failed. They could add more mystery around the secret department and AI, and then develop an arc for it. But they didn't. Atleast not yet.

Drarmha:It must be the unknown data code that was said by 'Mu Yutong'
menimho
menimhoLv14menimho

I think that his brain was stimulated for so long, matching the data processing of the super computer that it rewired itself to adapt to it

LazyCorpz:I know. But then tthats very convenient way to close off a plot hole. Thats why I said that the author failed. They could add more mystery around the secret department and AI, and then develop an arc for it. But they didn't. Atleast not yet.
BurnzRocks
BurnzRocksLv3BurnzRocks

If you read the mtl translations of this you would realize that this book is a bomber. with over seventeen thousand chapters everything is explained and the world building is extremely completed and almost everything seems like a plot hole until you read for at least another one hundred chapters. I regret finishing it in two weeks because now I'll have to find something to red that lives up to this. 10/10 would recomend

LazyCorpz:Ok. The biggest plot hole here is his cheat. How did he get it? Why doesn't he care? If the AI is already done, can other people use it to(through cameras and other devices) improve martial arts? Otherwise, its fine. The MC's character for first 20 chapters has remained consistent. Not much world building yet.
LazyCorpz
LazyCorpzLv11LazyCorpz

Could you please tell me how many chapter it has? I don't remember why I dropped this but if it has low amount of chapters, I might try again.

BurnzRocks:If you read the mtl translations of this you would realize that this book is a bomber. with over seventeen thousand chapters everything is explained and the world building is extremely completed and almost everything seems like a plot hole until you read for at least another one hundred chapters. I regret finishing it in two weeks because now I'll have to find something to red that lives up to this. 10/10 would recomend
BurnzRocks
BurnzRocksLv3BurnzRocks

It has 1770 chapters

LazyCorpz:Could you please tell me how many chapter it has? I don't remember why I dropped this but if it has low amount of chapters, I might try again.
Venne_18
Venne_18Lv2Venne_18

I was perplexed how a novel can have 17 thousand plus chapters. Turns out it was 17 hundreds. I would have skipped this if it really has 17k chapsđŸ„č

BurnzRocks:It has 1770 chapters